1 all the anxiety and nervousness how do I trust? I don't even know me how can I trust you? 2 what is life about? today its freezing, tomorrow the sun scorchs maybe yesterday's outpour should share some drops and keep tomorrow at room temp 3 love seems complicated today than yesterday they say, love until it hurts- but, it is love...why the tears? don't flowers smell good? 4 living is crazy, only God can prove scientists' claims the chaos they bring, the confusion keep us all living wishfully maybe I should travel and visit The Almighty soon 5 he tries coming close to him but he pulls away everytime, drifting apart and he tires and kills that side of him, and you ask why we hate... 6 crazy life on earth what to do live or leave
This is my trial of ‘fragment’
I like that picture and your interpretation! We all have different questions to ask. Some (most) will never be answered.
I don’t even want the answers to some. lol
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so true, some answers should never be revealed. This helps keep life mysterious and amazing
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Some things must be left alone. There’s not an answer for everything. The knowing lies within and comes with experiences. 🙂
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Unfortunately for us, that is the sad reality. Life is beautifully crazy
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It truly is. 🙂
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Sami, your fragments brought tears to my eyes. Stanzas #3 and #4 stand out for me. Very powerful image to go with your poem also.
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It came from a place of despair…I really missed you, how are you doing?
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Aww, thank you, Sami. I missed you and dVerse. I’m doing better after a break, thank you for asking.
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You are so welcome.
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‘what is life about?
today its freezing, tomorrow the sun scorches
maybe yesterday’s outpour should share some drops
and keep tomorrow at room temp’
It would be nice if this could be so but I think life is never at room temperature. Enjoyed your thoughtful poem Sami.
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Its never, it was just wishful thinking😂 thanks for your thoughts
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So many questions, hopes, and wishes. Life is complicated and experience is so important.
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So true
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Crazy life on earth. Love and live it of course. I like your fragments. 👏
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It is really crazy down here. Thanks 😊
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The words reach out, and grab, questioning me as the reader, offering me half solutions, thankfully only half, cleverly done, how you tweaked thoughts, a bit this way, then that…
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I am so glad it had that effect, my thoughts were kinda jammed that day while I wrote. Thanks for your comments
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You have captured the essence of our crazy lives on Earth.
Also, I love the picture.
~ornery owl~
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Its so crazy ain’t it?
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Yo Eyieko — I am in the half-sleep insomniac bloom of zolpidem, but I like your work. I will return when I am once again razored out to write a ringing comment! ✌🏼❤️
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thanks Rob😂😂
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the title alone is an intriguing fragment, and you keep up the mystery and of half understanding throughout these fragments – Bravo!
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Thank you dearly Laura
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I really love the way you tied it together… separate aphorisms making it whole… the way they become shorter and shorter also leaves me with a sense of urgency.
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then at least one objective was achieved, Thanks Bjorn
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